portico: Tweak punctuation on /hello and /try-zulip.

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Alya Abbott 2024-02-28 17:21:28 -08:00 committed by Tim Abbott
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<h1>Organized team&nbsp;chat</h1>
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The calmer, more efficient way to work
The calmer, more efficient way to work.
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<h2 class="screen-2__header">Efficient communication</h2>
<h2 class="screen-2__header">Efficient communication.</h2>
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Unlike other chat apps, Zulip lets you read and respond to&nbsp;every message <em>in&nbsp;context</em>, no&nbsp;matter when it&nbsp;was sent. Maintain your <em>focus</em> and catch up&nbsp;on&nbsp;your own time <em>without stress</em>, reading just the&nbsp;topics <em>you care about</em>.
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Zulip&rsquo;s <strong>threading model</strong> makes it so&nbsp;much easier to <strong>manage my&nbsp;team</strong>... As&nbsp;a&nbsp;leader, <strong>in&nbsp;just a&nbsp;few minutes</strong> I&nbsp;can get an&nbsp;overview over what&rsquo;s going on and see where my&nbsp;attention is&nbsp;needed.
Zulip&rsquo;s <strong>threading model</strong> makes it so&nbsp;much easier to <strong>manage my&nbsp;team</strong> As&nbsp;a&nbsp;leader, <strong>in&nbsp;just a&nbsp;few minutes</strong> I&nbsp;can get an&nbsp;overview over what&rsquo;s going on and see where my&nbsp;attention is&nbsp;needed.
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<h2 class="screen-3__header">Collaboration at scale</h2>
<h2 class="screen-3__header">Collaboration at scale.</h2>
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Zulip helps teams of&nbsp;all sizes be <em>more productive</em> together, from a&nbsp;few friends hacking on&nbsp;a&nbsp;new idea, to&nbsp;<em>globally distributed</em> organizations with hundreds of&nbsp;people tackling the world&rsquo;s hardest problems.
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Zulip has the <strong>best user experience</strong> of&nbsp;all the chat apps I&rsquo;ve tried... It&nbsp;is&nbsp;the only app that makes hundreds of&nbsp;conversations <strong>manageable</strong>.
Zulip has the <strong>best user experience</strong> of&nbsp;all the chat apps I&rsquo;ve tried It&nbsp;is&nbsp;the only app that makes hundreds of&nbsp;conversations <strong>manageable</strong>.
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<h2 class="screen-4__header">Enterprise ready</h2>
<h2 class="screen-4__header">Enterprise ready.</h2>
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Take charge of&nbsp;your mission-critical communications with Zulip&rsquo;s reliable <a href="/for/open-source/">100% free and open-source software</a>, with no&nbsp;vendor lock-in. You can count on&nbsp;our industry-leading <a href="/security/">security practices</a> to&nbsp;keep your data safe.
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<a href="/for/business/">Business</a>
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Zulip is everything Slack is, but it's <strong>smarter</strong> and more powerful... There's even support for getting messages from Slack and IRC
Zulip is everything Slack is, but its <strong>smarter</strong> and more powerful.
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<a href="/for/open-source/">Open source</a>
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Rust development would not be <strong>moving at the pace</strong> that it has been without Zulip...
Rust development would not be <strong>moving at the pace</strong> that it has been without Zulip.
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<a href="/for/education/">Education</a>
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Zulips topics have made it much easier for me to keep things <strong>coherent</strong>...
Zulips topics have made it much easier for me to keep things <strong>coherent</strong>.
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<a href="/for/research/">Research</a>
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The excellent LaTeX rendering and clever threading make it far <strong>superior to email</strong> and Slack
The excellent LaTeX rendering and clever threading make it far <strong>superior to email</strong> and Slack.
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<a href="/for/events/">Events</a>
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With Zulip, questions or ideas were <strong>spread openly</strong>...
With Zulip, questions or ideas were <strong>spread openly</strong>.
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<a href="/for/communities/">Communities</a>
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No other tool has a user experience that <strong>scales</strong> to a community of our size...
No other tool has a user experience that <strong>scales</strong> to a community of our size.
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<h1 class="center">Try Zulip now</h1>
<h1 class="center">Try Zulip now.</h1>
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Check out the Zulip app in the <a
href="https://chat.zulip.org">Zulip development