From c5a5dd9336c6a899f15e6776e0e6b2b7105cca43 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alya Abbott Date: Wed, 28 Feb 2024 17:21:28 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] portico: Tweak punctuation on /hello and /try-zulip. --- templates/corporate/hello.html | 24 ++++++++++++------------ templates/corporate/try-zulip.html | 2 +- 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/templates/corporate/hello.html b/templates/corporate/hello.html index 7b69651026..e623c8281e 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/hello.html +++ b/templates/corporate/hello.html @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@

Organized team chat

- The calmer, more efficient way to work + The calmer, more efficient way to work.
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Efficient communication

+

Efficient communication.

Unlike other chat apps, Zulip lets you read and respond to every message in context, no matter when it was sent. Maintain your focus and catch up on your own time without stress, reading just the topics you care about.
- Zulip’s threading model makes it so much easier to manage my team... As a leader, in just a few minutes I can get an overview over what’s going on and see where my attention is needed. + Zulip’s threading model makes it so much easier to manage my team… As a leader, in just a few minutes I can get an overview over what’s going on and see where my attention is needed.
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Collaboration at scale

+

Collaboration at scale.

Zulip helps teams of all sizes be more productive together, from a few friends hacking on a new idea, to globally distributed organizations with hundreds of people tackling the world’s hardest problems.
- Zulip has the best user experience of all the chat apps I’ve tried... It is the only app that makes hundreds of conversations manageable. + Zulip has the best user experience of all the chat apps I’ve tried… It is the only app that makes hundreds of conversations manageable.
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Enterprise ready

+

Enterprise ready.

Take charge of your mission-critical communications with Zulip’s reliable 100% free and open-source software, with no vendor lock-in. You can count on our industry-leading security practices to keep your data safe. @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ Business

- Zulip is everything Slack is, but it's smarter and more powerful... There's even support for getting messages from Slack and IRC + Zulip is everything Slack is, but it’s smarter and more powerful.
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ Open source
- Rust development would not be moving at the pace that it has been without Zulip... + Rust development would not be moving at the pace that it has been without Zulip.
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ Education
- Zulip’s topics have made it much easier for me to keep things coherent... + Zulip’s topics have made it much easier for me to keep things coherent.
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ Research
- The excellent LaTeX rendering and clever threading make it far superior to email and Slack + The excellent LaTeX rendering and clever threading make it far superior to email and Slack.
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ Events
- With Zulip, questions or ideas were spread openly... + With Zulip, questions or ideas were spread openly.
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ Communities
- No other tool has a user experience that scales to a community of our size... + No other tool has a user experience that scales to a community of our size.
diff --git a/templates/corporate/try-zulip.html b/templates/corporate/try-zulip.html index 59812b2ea4..f990b7e42c 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/try-zulip.html +++ b/templates/corporate/try-zulip.html @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
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Try Zulip now

+

Try Zulip now.

Check out the Zulip app in the Zulip development