docs: Break up a long sentence in Apple auth instructions.

This also helps keep the actionable part short, by separating
the actionable instruction from the longer parenthetical
explaining what it's for.
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Greg Price 2020-06-23 17:44:55 -07:00
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@ -603,13 +603,13 @@ domain for your server).
and "Team ID" as `SOCIAL_AUTH_APPLE_TEAM` in `settings.py` file.
1. In the Apple developer site, configure the domains your Zulip
server uses when sending outgoing email notifications (this is
required for your Zulip server to deliver emails to the many Apple
users who use their privacy-protecting forwarding service). See the
"Email Relay Service" subsection of [this page][apple-get-started] for
more information. See Zulip's [outgoing email
documentation][outgoing-email] for details on what From addresses
Zulip uses when sending outgoing emails.
server uses when sending outgoing email notifications. (This is
required for your Zulip server to deliver emails to the many Apple
users who use their privacy-protecting forwarding service.) See the
"Email Relay Service" subsection of [this page][apple-get-started]
for more information. See Zulip's [outgoing email
documentation][outgoing-email] for details on what From addresses
Zulip uses when sending outgoing emails.
[apple-create-services-id]: https://help.apple.com/developer-account/?lang=en#/dev1c0e25352
[apple-developer]: https://developer.apple.com/account/resources/