From 9b620dfe6c67b62988df496df10897e9f770e9b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Greg Price Date: Tue, 23 Jun 2020 17:44:55 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] docs: Break up a long sentence in Apple auth instructions. This also helps keep the actionable part short, by separating the actionable instruction from the longer parenthetical explaining what it's for. --- docs/production/authentication-methods.md | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/production/authentication-methods.md b/docs/production/authentication-methods.md index 01edaa6ab1..df413af78c 100644 --- a/docs/production/authentication-methods.md +++ b/docs/production/authentication-methods.md @@ -603,13 +603,13 @@ domain for your server). and "Team ID" as `SOCIAL_AUTH_APPLE_TEAM` in `settings.py` file. 1. In the Apple developer site, configure the domains your Zulip -server uses when sending outgoing email notifications (this is -required for your Zulip server to deliver emails to the many Apple -users who use their privacy-protecting forwarding service). See the -"Email Relay Service" subsection of [this page][apple-get-started] for -more information. See Zulip's [outgoing email -documentation][outgoing-email] for details on what From addresses -Zulip uses when sending outgoing emails. + server uses when sending outgoing email notifications. (This is + required for your Zulip server to deliver emails to the many Apple + users who use their privacy-protecting forwarding service.) See the + "Email Relay Service" subsection of [this page][apple-get-started] + for more information. See Zulip's [outgoing email + documentation][outgoing-email] for details on what From addresses + Zulip uses when sending outgoing emails. [apple-create-services-id]: https://help.apple.com/developer-account/?lang=en#/dev1c0e25352 [apple-developer]: https://developer.apple.com/account/resources/