diff --git a/templates/corporate/features.html b/templates/corporate/features.html index 1134524a84..b856aca1a3 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/features.html +++ b/templates/corporate/features.html @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
-

Complete team chat solution

+

Organized team chat solution

From small teams to organizations with thousands of users, Zulip has you covered. See plans and pricing. diff --git a/templates/corporate/for/business.html b/templates/corporate/for/business.html index 2a0eb742e8..fe826f45db 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/for/business.html +++ b/templates/corporate/for/business.html @@ -4,8 +4,7 @@ {% set PAGE_TITLE = "Zulip for business" %} {% set PAGE_DESCRIPTION = "Zulip offers efficient communication for your - business, with organized and inclusive threaded team chat. Free for - light use!" %} + business. Learn how organized team chat will make your team more productive." %} {% block customhead %} @@ -19,7 +18,7 @@

Efficient communication for your business.

-

Organized and inclusive threaded team chat.
Free for light use!

+

Learn how organized team chat will
make your team more productive.

{{ _('Create organization') }} diff --git a/templates/corporate/for/education.html b/templates/corporate/for/education.html index 705589f8bb..a6a70a7d70 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/for/education.html +++ b/templates/corporate/for/education.html @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@

Make Zulip the communication hub for your class.

- Zulip is the only modern team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Post lecture notes and announcements, answer students’ questions, and coordinate with teaching staff all in one place. + Zulip is the organized team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Post lecture notes and announcements, answer students’ questions, and coordinate with teaching staff all in one place.

diff --git a/templates/corporate/for/events.html b/templates/corporate/for/events.html index 05e1babecb..45a0d3478c 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/for/events.html +++ b/templates/corporate/for/events.html @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@

Make Zulip the communication hub for your event.

- Zulip is the only modern team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Post presentations and announcements, host Q&A sessions, and coordinate among organizers. + Zulip is the organized team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Post presentations and announcements, host Q&A sessions, and coordinate among organizers.

diff --git a/templates/corporate/for/open-source.html b/templates/corporate/for/open-source.html index 0160bbe337..006382504d 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/for/open-source.html +++ b/templates/corporate/for/open-source.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ {% set PAGE_TITLE = "Zulip for open-source projects" %} {% set PAGE_DESCRIPTION = "Grow your community with thoughtful and inclusive - discussion, using the only modern team chat app that is ideal for both live + discussion, using the organized team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations." %} {% block customhead %} @@ -47,8 +47,7 @@

Make Zulip the communication hub for your open-source community.

- Zulip is the only modern - team chat app that is ideal for both + Zulip is the organized team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Discuss issues, pull requests and feature ideas, engage with users, answer questions, and onboard new contributors. diff --git a/templates/corporate/for/research.html b/templates/corporate/for/research.html index e24aa0a50f..f459c3d2a5 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/for/research.html +++ b/templates/corporate/for/research.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ {% set PAGE_TITLE = "Zulip for researchers and academics" %} {% set PAGE_DESCRIPTION = "Make Zulip the communication hub for your research - group, department or scientific field. The only modern team chat ideal for both + group, department or scientific field. Organized team chat ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations." %} {% block customhead %} @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@

Make Zulip the communication hub for your research community.

- Zulip is the only modern team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Coordinate with collaborators, post questions and ideas, and learn from others in your field. + Zulip is the organized team chat app that is ideal for both live and asynchronous conversations. Coordinate with collaborators, post questions and ideas, and learn from others in your field.

diff --git a/templates/corporate/values.html b/templates/corporate/values.html index 66ff54c8da..d7f9be9c09 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/values.html +++ b/templates/corporate/values.html @@ -3,7 +3,8 @@ {% set PAGE_TITLE = "Zulip project values" %} -{% set PAGE_DESCRIPTION = "Learn about the values that are behind everything we do as we work to build the world’s best team chat software." %} +{% set PAGE_DESCRIPTION = "Learn about the values that are behind everything we + do as we work to build the world’s best organized team chat software." %} {% block customhead %} @@ -18,8 +19,8 @@

Zulip project values

- These values are behind everything we do
- as we work to build the world’s best team chat software. + These values are behind everything we do as we
+ work to build the world’s best organized team chat.

diff --git a/templates/corporate/values.md b/templates/corporate/values.md index 7f94f80529..96477d12d9 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/values.md +++ b/templates/corporate/values.md @@ -49,11 +49,12 @@ contributing to Zulip than in their 4-year formal computer science education. ## Building a sustainable business aligned with our values -Guiding the Zulip community in developing a world-class team chat product with -apps for every major desktop and mobile platform requires leadership from a -talented, dedicated team. We believe that the only sustainable model is for our -core team to be compensated fairly for their time. We have thus **founded a -company (Kandra Labs) to steward and financially support Zulip’s development**. +Guiding the Zulip community in developing a world-class organized team chat +product with apps for every major desktop and mobile platform requires +leadership from a talented, dedicated team. We believe that the only sustainable +model is for our core team to be compensated fairly for their time. We have thus +**founded a company (Kandra Labs) to steward and financially support Zulip’s +development**. We are **growing our business sustainably**, without venture capital funding. VCs are incentivized to push companies to gamble for explosive growth. Often, diff --git a/templates/corporate/why-zulip.md b/templates/corporate/why-zulip.md index 02c671db94..36d2a4a36f 100644 --- a/templates/corporate/why-zulip.md +++ b/templates/corporate/why-zulip.md @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ notifications. ## Zulip empowers teams to work flexibly anytime, from anywhere, without interruptions. -With team chat that is designed for both synchronous and asynchronous +With organized team chat that is designed for both synchronous and asynchronous communication, everyone can be included in decision-making without being online at the same time. Team members can focus when they need to, and contribute to discussions asynchronously without interrupting their flow. diff --git a/zerver/tests/test_docs.py b/zerver/tests/test_docs.py index 8a6e101905..ca0092817f 100644 --- a/zerver/tests/test_docs.py +++ b/zerver/tests/test_docs.py @@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ class DocPageTest(ZulipTestCase): self._test("/hello/", ["your mission-critical communications with Zulip"]) self._test("/communities/", ["Open communities directory"]) self._test("/development-community/", ["Zulip development community"]) - self._test("/features/", ["Complete team chat solution"]) + self._test("/features/", ["Organized team chat solution"]) self._test("/jobs/", ["Work with us"]) self._test("/self-hosting/", ["Self-host Zulip"]) self._test("/security/", ["TLS encryption"])