diff --git a/zerver/lib/onboarding.py b/zerver/lib/onboarding.py index 2bdb08a6eb..dc669d8619 100644 --- a/zerver/lib/onboarding.py +++ b/zerver/lib/onboarding.py @@ -65,9 +65,7 @@ def send_initial_pms(user: UserProfile) -> None: if user.is_realm_admin: help_url = user.realm.uri + "/help/getting-your-organization-started-with-zulip" organization_setup_text = ( - "* " - + _("[Read the guide]({help_url}) for getting your organization started with Zulip") - + "\n" + " " + _("We also have a guide for [Setting up your organization]({help_url}).") ).format(help_url=help_url) welcome_msg = _("Hello, and welcome to Zulip!") @@ -78,28 +76,28 @@ def send_initial_pms(user: UserProfile) -> None: content = "".join( [ - welcome_msg + "\n\n", - _("This is a private message from me, Welcome Bot.") + " ", - _("Here are some tips to get you started:") + "\n", - "* " + _("Download our [Desktop and mobile apps]({apps_url})") + "\n", + welcome_msg + " ", + _("This is a private message from me, Welcome Bot.") + "\n\n", "* " - + _("Customize your account and notifications on your [Settings page]({settings_url})") - + "\n", - "* " - + _("Type `?` to check out Zulip's keyboard shortcuts") - + "\n {organization_setup_text}\n", - _("The most important shortcut is `r` to reply.") + "\n\n", + + _( + "If you are new to Zulip, check out our [Getting started guide]({getting_started_url})!" + ) + + "{organization_setup_text}\n", + "* " + _("[Add a profile picture]({profile_url}).") + "\n", + "* " + _("[Browse and subscribe to streams]({streams_url}).") + "\n", + "* " + _("Download our [mobile and desktop apps]({apps_url}).") + " ", + _("Zulip also works great in a browser.") + "\n", + "* " + _("You can type `?` to learn more about Zulip shortcuts.") + "\n\n", _("Practice sending a few messages by replying to this conversation.") + " ", - _( - "If you're not into keyboards, that's okay too; " - "clicking anywhere on this message will also do the trick!" - ), + _("Click anywhere on this message or press `r` to reply."), ] ) content = content.format( + getting_started_url="/help/getting-started-with-zulip", apps_url="/apps", - settings_url="#settings", + profile_url="#settings/profile", + streams_url="#streams/all", organization_setup_text=organization_setup_text, demo_org_help_url="/help/demo-organizations", )