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templates: Add comma to all uses of "e.g." in corporate templates.

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Lauryn Menard 2024-07-04 14:11:37 +02:00 committed by Tim Abbott
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templates/corporate/for/communities.md
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@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Zulip’s topic-based threading model solves the problems described above:
members in two major ways. First, they can easily browse what
conversations happened while they were away from the community, and
prioritize which conversations to read now, skip, or read later
(e.g. on the weekend). Second, Zulip makes it easy for them to have
(e.g., on the weekend). Second, Zulip makes it easy for them to have
public conversations with participation from other community members
(potentially split over hours, days, or weeks as needed), allowing
them to fully participate in the work of the community.

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templates/corporate/policies/privacy.md
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@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ provide them to us:
| **Web Analytics** | - Web page interactions<br>- Referring webpage/source through which you accessed the Services<br>- Statistics associated with the interaction between device or browser and the Services | - Service Providers<br>- Analytics Partners |
| **Social Network Data** | - Email address<br>- User name | - Service Providers |
| **Geolocation Data** | - IP-address-based coarse location information | - Service Providers<br>- Analytics Partners |
| **Other Identifying Information that You Voluntarily Choose to Provide** | - Identifying information in emails, letters, Zulip messages or support communications you send us<br>- Zulip messages, uploaded files, channel descriptions, and other content you provide using our Services (e.g. in a Zulip client) <br>- Values of custom profile fields configured by your Zulip Organization, where you might choose to enter your phone number, job title, birthday, or other biographical details. | - Service Providers<br>- Parties You Authorize, Access or Authenticate |
| **Other Identifying Information that You Voluntarily Choose to Provide** | - Identifying information in emails, letters, Zulip messages or support communications you send us<br>- Zulip messages, uploaded files, channel descriptions, and other content you provide using our Services (e.g., in a Zulip client) <br>- Values of custom profile fields configured by your Zulip Organization, where you might choose to enter your phone number, job title, birthday, or other biographical details. | - Service Providers<br>- Parties You Authorize, Access or Authenticate |
| **Other Identifying Information that Another User Chooses to Provide to You** | - Messages or other content that other Zulip users may send you. <br>- Messages or content that any Zulip Organization Administrator of a Zulip community that you may join may provide about you. | - Service Providers<br>- Parties You Authorize, Access or Authenticate |
@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ We collect Personal Data about you from the following categories of sources:
desktop apps, or interact with the Services over a network
using a web browser or other client, we may receive and
collect information about your device and your network
connection (e.g. your IP address).
connection (e.g., your IP address).
- If you download a Zulip application such as our mobile and
desktop apps, or interact with the Services over a network
using a web browser or other client, we may receive and

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templates/corporate/security.md
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@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ priority.
[LDAP/Active Directory][ldap-name]).
- Zulip provides many options for
[managing who can join the organization](/help/invite-new-users),
supporting everything from open to the public (e.g. for open source
supporting everything from open to the public (e.g., for open source
projects), to requiring an invitation to join, to having an email from a
list of domains, to being a member of a specific organization in
LDAP/Active Directory.
@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ priority.
- Zulip’s server logging has configurable log rotation policies and can be
used for an end-to-end history of system usage.
- Zulip stores in its database a permanent long-term audit log containing
the history of important actions (e.g. changes to passwords, email
the history of important actions (e.g., changes to passwords, email
addresses, and channel subscriptions).
- Zulip’s powerful data exports
([on-premise](https://zulip.readthedocs.io/en/latest/production/export-and-import.html),
@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ the industry:
to sensitive customer data.
- Our error handling systems have been designed from the beginning to
avoid including user message content in error reports, even in cases where
this makes debugging quite difficult (e.g. bugs in the message rendering
this makes debugging quite difficult (e.g., bugs in the message rendering
codebase).
- Zulip has a carefully designed API surface area of only about 100 API
endpoints. For comparison, products of similar scope typically have